You hadn’t been taught to look back,
I haven’t yet learnt to look away.
While you walked, off I gazed.
You didn’t even turn, to see me stay.
Darkness exists for the light to shine
You hadn’t been taught to look back,
I haven’t yet learnt to look away.
While you walked, off I gazed.
You didn’t even turn, to see me stay.
Few words but still saying what you want to say. Loved it 🙂
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Thankyouu. Thats just the way i like it, few words saying a lot. I believe when its short, it satys with you for longer and its interpretation then depends upon the the depth you want to dig out of it. And thanks a lotttt m8.
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Pleasure is all mine 🙂 and yes you’re right. Sometimes few words speaks a lot.
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Goooooooodddness gracious this is beautifully heartcrushing. I’m really impressed with how much gut-kicking emotion you put into each short line. 😊👍😫
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Wow this means so much thankzz a lotttt
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This is so nerve wrecking 😭.
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Thankyouuuu. This means a lot m8
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Very nice. I love this one. 4 lines yet a whole series of emotions and a full scene description.
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Thankyou:))))
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I think your words are beautiful! In appreciation for your blog, I have nominated you for a Liebster award. 🙂
Visit the link below and follow the steps. Happy blogging!
https://inkstainedfeelings.wordpress.com/2018/01/28/liebster-award/
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Thankyou for nominating me and thinking that u deserved it.
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I definitely think you deserve it. Your words are honest and clear….and they touch my heart. That’s what great writing is.
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Thankyou, this means a lot to me, specially coming from you, you are so great at poetry. I loveall of what you write
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Thank you so so much. 😊
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Do go to the link I shared above and follow the steps for the Liebster award. Don’t forget to add your own questions and also nominate a few others who you think deserve it. Tag me in your post once you’re done so I can check out your answers. 🙂
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Yaa sure:))
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Wow I am loving all of your words! It’s really awesome =)
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Thanks a lot m8
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I want you to stay with me… I love the poem. Beautifully written.
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Thankyou so much.
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You’re most welcome
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Haha this is me.
You write so well vk
I can’t even describe how much beautifully you’ve grown as a person . ❤
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Lol thank-you bro. Glad you liked it:))
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Well!! You’ll be surprised to know that my next writing has the same title.
By the way well written!!
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Woah! That’s wonderful, I’ll look forward to reading it. By the way, Thankyou:)
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Damn.
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The feels! you’re gifted ❤
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Thankyou!
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This is my situation right now. I relate to this so much. Amazing. ❤
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Your situation? That’s sad if you’re the one hurting rn. But in the end we alekhyaa get what we deserve. And I’m glad you liked it. Really means a lot:))
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Just love the way describe feelings so aptly and beautifully in such precise words..loved it 😊
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More power to your pen. 🙂
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Glad you feel so:) Thankyou so much m8
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I love your poetry writing style. It’s truly amazing since you pen them down in such a concise manner. 💙
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Thanks a lot, honestly!
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“You didn’t even turn to see me stay” – that’s it, that’s everything in one line.
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