No one cares,
Even when i knew,
I dont know why,
I wanted you to.
When you said you love me,
I knew you were lying,
But to trust your words,
My heart was dying.
Darkness exists for the light to shine
No one cares,
Even when i knew,
I dont know why,
I wanted you to.
When you said you love me,
I knew you were lying,
But to trust your words,
My heart was dying.
Is it you or your pain speaking?
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Its what i feel about it speaking:) i’d surely check it out tho
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Thanks. and urs was short but said a lot of words.
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Haha i read your latest story, i was amazing. Youve got this thing for writing, youre so good and you complementing means a lot.
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Haa Haa. Urs was really nice. I like poems which are short yet expresses a lot. I can’t write such poems and thus appreciate when I read one.
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Thanks a lot😊
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nice post 🙂
Troy
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Thankyou🙂Troy
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you have nicely penned it…
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Thankyou:)
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Heartbreaking and beautiful.
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I’m glad you liked it.
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Haha so relatable vk ❤
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How is it relatable?-_-
I wrote it jff lol
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Its like a injection shot in the arm – neat, precise and hurts just as much as necessary. Kudos 🙂
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Thankyou for taking out time for it. Hope it was worth it:) thanks a lot!
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Nicely done
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Thanks:)
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so real. sad, but real. this is great
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True.. thanks a lot:)
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This was something terrific.
Very well written 😁
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Thankyou s much. I’m glad you liked it.
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My heartttttt. This is amazing. ❤😍
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Thankyou soooo much! Really!
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Something gorgeous about fifty people reading the same lines at different times. Power. ❤️
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Amazes me too, the power that words hold.
And how powerful can they make a person, who knows how to play with them right.
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It seems you just put my heart out on paper. Speechless. Keep it up.
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Thankyou soo much!means s lot
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this sort of echoes mt unsaid words… all those times I’ve felt so! including today… this is such a neat reflection.
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